I cannot claim I’ve never cried
aloud for time to quit its silence.
I cannot name that sovereign dusk
that shatters sky with violence,
and renders us as silhouettes
at one both burned and violet.
--Gainesville, (2004?)
The rest of the poem doesn't live up to this stanza. I might chuck the rest of it... or reconstruct a new poem around it.
Posted by daleth at July 21, 2008 11:44 PM